I adore the design, there's something very primal about rigid spikes, I gotta say, and the nudity as well really shows the "beast" aspect in it's fullest.
I'm interested in where you thought the composition sucked, because It looks good here, Maya really jumps out at the viewer as the centre of attention, and the background smoothly blends.
Aw thanks! c:
I think I'm happy with the way Maya turned out-- it's just everything else in the background that I didn't like. I was debating on getting rid of the cobra entirely, and the hourglass could use a lot more reflective highlights/shadows..
Come to think of it, her arms still aren't balanced--
And her eyes--
lol SORRY I THINK I'VE JUST BEEN STARING AT IT FOR TOO LONG
What can I say man you're just getting better and better with these pieces.
You're colouring has improved vastly, your shading, your understanding of anatomy. Only issues I can gauge are her small hands and long neck, that just seem off to me.
Keep this up man it's a record of your ascent into greatness, or at least a level your happy with.
It's good to see how Mikoto's developing so far, the tattoos are nice too, make me think Inca or Aztec, just generally belonging to an ancient civilization. Strong bold markings with details inside them.
Third time, third love, keep it up man, I find the sin they represent debatable, but adore the style none the less.
Not sure why Red Robin would be vengeance, I feel vengeance was Batman's whole spiel, as for James Gordan being cowardice? He fights police corruption by himself, and shown in Year One he lost his old job by taking a cop to prison.
But of course this is your interpreted and you're free to it, Batman fans like myself could pick holes in anything until time itself stopped, all that matters is you interpreted it well and created a fantastic piece!
The reason why I wouldn't make Jim be a fighter in my story, is because I'd like to keep Batman being the one doing the heroics. I thought Batman failed too much on top of having so many flaws in the new ones. I would like Jim to be like the audience's perspective. None of us can do what he does because reality weighs down on us, but we'll always root for Batman to do our biding.
Veeeery nice Jazza! I love the lighting, and I must say it looks like all that background must've been difficult, the angles the shapes, oh god, but you did it and pulled it off nicely, great work, Steve? looks good, the most grizzled Steve? I've ever seen, but who wouldn't be if they lived in a world alone, surviving by themselves without shaving gear.
Fantastic work once again!
Brilliant stuff, as with all your sketches coming out at the moment, a real treat for the eyes, and I hope you keep it up!
I love the posing, and I'm not an expert on anatomy but what I can see is good, the hands seem a little dwarfed from what I can see, I figure a hand can usually cover the owners face, and it seems a little small for the rest of her. I like the tufts at the bottom of the shorts, the curving of the back looks great to me, the indent of the spine and her shoulder plates work out nicely.
Great job overall, some work required, but I can't really say much more for a sketchy piece like this, as scratchy lines and overall sketchiness is an overarching theme.
As I said in the last review, I adore the style, there's an amazing simplicity to it, because it can look basic at a glance, but the contrast in colours make the characters stand out, and it's really pleasing to look at, I really enjoy this style and am really eager to see what more can come from this.
Very nice work, I adore the stylistic approach to the characters, how they're coloured in ways that highlight their distinct features.
Very nice work! I really dig the style.
I don't think I can possibly do anything but love Daisy so I'll say for the umpteenth time, that I am loving this style. She's sweet and pretty, and in this piece she looks a bit older, more mature facially, and more filled out in her body.
Great work!
Karla looks great! I love this style, I love her hair with the silver rings hanging from it, good shading on the armour too!
One Ash Legion soldier people wont expect to be busting out the shadows!
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Maya: Beast Form 
Akane 
Mikoto Tattoo Design 
Batman Sins 3 
Steve, Explorer of Mines 
Sketchy-Style Butt 
Batman Sins 2 
Batman Sins 
Daisy 
Karla Shadowdance 
