Onikage01's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sketchy-Style Rachel]

Very nice work, you work this style very well, you're bordering pinup!

Keep it up!

[Bella Drake]

Looks like you've gone down a more stylistic route with this piece and it's always refreshing to see something new come up in an artist's gallery.

Digging the colours, nice skin tones that go paler around parts that would obviously be covered more often. There's a sheen/gloss on places I don't understand the reasoning for because she doesn't look particularly wet, but it may be part of the style you decided on for this piece.

I can't think of many things to critique on, because I can't decide what was intended and what wasn't. I think her left boob looks a little odd in angle and... "fullness" it seems to be smaller than her right.

Great piece overall with a refreshing new approach to your work, can't wait to see what you create next.

[A Sticky Situation]

Nice work man, good nice sketchy detail works for this piece, and helps make the world look darker, gloomier and brings a general somberness to the picture, great work with the colours, lots of drab, browns and worn textures.

Very nice work, keep it up!

JesusCondom responds:

Yeah, I'll admit that environmentally, depressing gray and brownish is all I know how to work with, and not even that. Thanks man :)

[Gaige]

Your style works really well with this, boarderlands is such a beautifully detailed and styled game series, and you can really do wonders with your take on it, nice work, great colours, fantastic shading, keep it up!

[Naiah - Improvement]

That is a heck of a lot of progress there man!

Your colours have grown sharper, and your tones have become more pronounced and blend better, the shine on her pants is a lot more realistic, and looks like real fabric (that also gathers by the boots and scrunches in a realistic fashion), the hair has changed completely but what there is has a nice natural colour transition between the groups of hair, reacting to like appropriately, it also splits, as would be a problem for this nautical nuisance!

The background also has changed drastically, making it harder to compare, the sand is toned well, and the part that's in shadow maintains it's texture. The sky, the sky is beautiful, warm colours give the feeling of heat sweeping across the dusty desert plains.

Finally, the dreaded part, the constructive critisim, it's all fantastic, the only issue I can place is that some of the colours seem to have left the lines, but I only see it when I view full size, the gold trim, which holds contrast to the red crosses the lines a fair few times, and due to their contrast it shows, that is all I can find, it's an amazing piece, keep at it, you're obviously improving in quantum leaps! (I don't know what a quantum leap is but I mean a lot)

[Divinitus - Colt and Naiah]

Colt and Naiah look superb there, there's a thin line between hate and stone cold buggery, where emotions blur and between the lines, sex spikes!

The looks they give each other show their feelings, of release and of the background emotions of a journey well travelled, of turns ill made and battles fought.

[Divinitus - The Mist Glades]

A fanatstic view, with lots of detail, the name fits the piece, and thats what you want for a picture that is built to sum it's name! Brilliant work.

I can't think of much more due to the majority being mist! But what there is, blades of grass and vines, they show well and look natural and well formed.

[Butt.]

I'd feel pervy-er If I gave it 5 stars, but the anatomy here (based on my knowledge of anatomy, as limited as that is) looks fantastic, the tones and shading are superb, the look of the shirt as it's lifted and the weighty feel of it in general shows very prominantly, and the small bits of hair at the top hang naturally.

An all and all brilliant piece through and through.

[Divinitus - Riel Ghassan]

I adore the shading, the details on the hair, and the overall colouring of this piece, brilliantly done, the lines on the shirt are a little sketchy but that's really all I can find in the faults section, bravo, keep it up!